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A-Course-In-Miracles-T.2-VII.2

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A Course In Miracles T.1-VII.2
Shot again at Creve Coeur Park in Maryland Heights, Missouri.
I like this one a lot better than the last one i posted. The presentation here is a lot cleaner and i was able to put it in a nice rectangle. It’s been suggested by LeotheFox :iconleothefox: that i vary it up a bit. I will be trying that later.
Since the words were fewer, i was able to use a more calligraphic script.
I wonder if i could not bust out some old calligraphy pens, do up some messages that i am into by hand, and then paste that over a photograph? Give it a different look. Not sure my old calligraphy skills are still there. Might be rusty. Can’t hurt to find out. :)
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This one also has a great message! :) The arrangement on the page is very visually attractive as well.  However, I find it kind of difficult to parse due to so many font sizes.  I agree that some variation in font size is beneficial, but in this particular instance I think there is too much.  Generally, larger or smaller font sizes should be used to emphasize importance of that section of the message. In this image, the 2 middle lines seem confusing in that they are one continuous idea (even listing a group of objects), but are different sizes therefore indicating different values.   While I understand that you were going for the rectangular shape here, I'm just not sure it works well with the way the message is broken up.  One possible suggestion (I'm not quite sure how this would line up without actually doing it, so it may not actually work, but it's worth a try):  make the 2 middle lines the same font size, have the line break between "create" and "the", then use spaces instead of font sizes to make everything line up as a rectangle.

I quite like this new project of yours that you've been working on :)