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A Course In Miracles T.1-V.1.4
This one was shot at my favorite park, Creve Coeur Park in Maryland Heights, Missouri. I walk a lot in this park and i meditate a lot in this park. I meet friends here, it is where the St. Louis Council holds the annual A Course In Miracles picnic...it has a lot of meaning to me.
I am not happy with this one at all. The message is fine, yes...but it’s too much for the space. Or it’s too much for this concept. It’s all over the place. There is no rhythm here. It just does not work.
The idea here is to share a part of the Course with others on facebook that share my beliefs. But i was chasing it here and it shows. I should have chosen fewer words.
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:la: I like the idea here, Stormy. I don't think there's anything wrong with saying a lot, but you might consider varying the font size more and having more variance in the margins to create flow :nod: Good on you spreading your message, buddy :hug: